I have read the draft, I have the sentences to say about it.
I was under the impression that the description was supposed to be written without any first-person mention? But besides that, I like how it's written, and I love the comedic aspect.
Anyway, great job, looks great, would read again (as if I haven't read it 5 times already and imposed it upon all my friends)!
I like to suffer creatively :D
I'm not sure tbh. This is a Public Anomaly Library though…
To explain what I think, I think its like the Ghost Busters. Call in say "heya I got an anomaly steve" and they send people while you write up a report to post on the Global Bulletin Board.
Since its Public, there is bound to be some not-as-professional writers.
I also like the contrast between GOD HIMSELF and "I shit my pants"
The description SHOULD be written in a more objective way, but it's allowed if it works for the overall vibe.
This article perfectly shows the wide range of ways you can write in, and I think the reason why it works so well is because there is a literal god that has taken residence on the ADR Earth and out of everyone that could write about it, it's just a random person.
I like it. Giant all-powerful idiotic god befriending an average joe with a dysfunctional sphincter. Honestly, I ship these two :)
The zennest of ions.
The ADR Team has fixed a couple of typos and phrasing errors. Ready for publishing! Feel free to do it whenever you want.
Congratulations on your god article! YIPPIIEEEE :D
EDIT: Forgot to mention that the whole ADR Team liked the article and we had both a great laugh and an existential crisis lol. Good job!
The zennest of ions.
Its posted and omg its looks so great :D
I'm a happy boi :D
Go check it out:
The theme actually looks better here than in Sandbox. Mainly the sidebar not being broken lol
Don't forget to remove the "locked"
