Thanks for the quick reply :)
1. I had nothing better to do, so I made a couple of fixes on a separate sandbox page. Feel free to keep some of them and change the ones you feel go against your envisioned wording for the article. I'll send it to you ASAP.
2. Fully valid, no objections here!
3. Ahhhh, so it's an entirely separate investigation group. Dope! This could work well in the future, as we plan on adding a page for "ADR affiliated groups".
4. Also valid.
5. I definitely suggest adding a photo to this. I have added a "placeholder" photo of an old wooden chair to my draft. Feel free to remove this if you'd like, but I'll tell you for certian that this will bring a lot more immersion to your article.
